Also: "The silence lifted somewhat as the sounds of the passengers struggling to open the doors of their cars reached her ears, and she was comforted, feeling suddenly less alone in this alien subterranean world which she’d travelled through every day for years without ever really paying attention to it."
I don't always hate sentences that end in prepositions, but I'm just sort of highlighting anything that jumps out at me as I read through. How about "...through which she'd travelled every day without ever really paying atttention."?
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Re: Ye ghodz...
Date: 2006-11-10 04:48 pm (UTC)Also: "The silence lifted somewhat as the sounds of the passengers struggling to open the doors of their cars reached her ears, and she was comforted, feeling suddenly less alone in this alien subterranean world which she’d travelled through every day for years without ever really paying attention to it."
I don't always hate sentences that end in prepositions, but I'm just sort of highlighting anything that jumps out at me as I read through. How about "...through which she'd travelled every day without ever really paying atttention."?